Monday, February 22, 2010

Ronda and Raven

I'm thinking about redoing my old comic story EDEN. I started it in 2001 I think. Just drawing girls for the first time. About this time I couldn't think of anything else. 9 years later, I'm still thinking about it. Like I said I threw it all in the trash once I figured I'd get with a real girl. I thought "what's the point of having the big box of pornography... people will just find it years later, and I can't bring it with me wherever I go." WRONG! as lex luthor would say. I did some of the finest drawings I've ever dones EVER in that whole comic series, shit was ridiculous, angles were outrageous, I had entire like majin buu dudes coming out of girl's breasts... what a series. And I could have scanned it... simple. I only have some very few fragments of it that I capture with my webcam one day. So it stings even more knowing that at the time I did think about capturing the entire thing digitally, but I simply decided not to... My parents even know about it, always have, so what the hell was I trying to hide in the end...

god damn. Well It's all in my head. It's not just porn. I hate porn because there's no intelligence to it and the few hentai with a little bit of brains behind it don't have much. The best one I've read to date being slut girl, it's what inspired ronda. Just as a work of art it's good, then it has a fun enjoyable story, that just happens to feature females naked. My porn, was an attempt to tackle that problem, how usually every hentai's just retarded. I tried to make it realistic in that the story would play out, and simply because Ronda was a hot female she ends up getting raped, but everything had some kind of purpose. Like when galactica inserted ronda into her butt, Ronda now had an opportunity to defeat her by shooting a fireball out her head. It wasn't just, oh she's naked now, fuck fuck fuck, splooge, noooo I had it all make sense as far as what would the character realistically do in that situation.

So I'm currently on the Ronda in The Lost World part. This was where I left off. The EDEN story ends on a cliff hanger. Lena, a converted henchman of Dr. Gero sacrifices herself to destroy the EDEN Android (I drew all of this shit while watching the Android saga of DBZ, so sue me!) and Eve uses her time machine (Yes she's based on trunks...) to evacuate everyone from the nuclear blast that occurs. And it prettymuch ends there. The next step for the story was to take it to years in the future where android edens taken over earth (where eve is from). But I decided to create side stories. They eventually get to the distopian future and all that, but this show called the lost world influenced me to try that out. So the time machine gets broken, and hops through space and time. One place is called "the lost world" it's a forest kind of planet or whatever, (it's the same world as pokemon in my mind) and there's all sorts of weird magical bullshit going on in it. Ronda is completely nude throughout it. I've never done that before. She's always clothed, then she gets her cloths ripped off, this time I'm keeping her naked. It plays into the whole getting back to nature theme as she becomes more linked to her animal heritage. (Saiyan females are based on cows, not monkeys like the males) In the end she gains an upgrade in power and then eve fixes the time machine and they're off to another adventure.

Then there was the final battle. I'd drawn only sketches and potential designs of the baddies. I based EDENs final look on Kate from kate's playground. She's nude but with a necklass and shoes only, and she's learned the animal transformation technique from her mother, so she's able to grow wings similar to a Raven, a reference to my own comic book hero I came up with in 8th grade. It's weird anime type shit, but roll with it, it gets good. So it's like the terminator. The thing that has to happen here is basically defeat android eden who has now prettymuch taken over the earth. Ronda steps aside and allows her daughter to finally fullfill her destiny and beat her evil twin. The battle rages over a volcanic terrain right, it's two godlike women, one looking like an angel, the other like a vampire, and they battle and battle and eventually eden wins, but then android eden pops out of the lava through her own butt hole and tries to pull eden in who is by this time totally exausted and bloody. Ronda and verona meanwhile are fighting each other over somewhere. Verona turns bad again after fusing *yes based on the fusion saga* with older verona who only has one arm, she then achieves super saiyan 4 like ronda, and the two beat each other up pretty darn good. Mean while Eve and her brother Adam (what?) who is also her father (yep, I decided she's an incest baby. See, Adam unknowingly impregnates both Eve and Eden during this chapter making Eve his mother and EDEN the mother of Eve, so awesome) fight with an underground resistance against the bog beasts and shit lead by none other than Linda the robo girl who ronda blew to pieces. She wants revenge. I can't remember how it all ended exactly since I never really totally made it to that chapter of the story. Eden doesn't just beat her though. It's a really tough battle...

I sketched the Jungle Girl character today. I knew I wanted a native to the pokemon lost world planet to save ronda from the rhino man (He's a mystical creature who comes rushing out of the jungle to rape girls if one raises her ass into the air and explose her butt hole, then it's over, you're getting fucked. in the butt. hard.) So ronda doesn't know this and she puts her ass in the air, and the dude slams her ass into a tree and she's taken by surprise, then jungle girl takes a passed out ronda back to her camp. She then explains to ronda that she was foolish to expose her back side. and then goes on to tell her about how to survive in the strange world and that she may be the chosen one who will defeat the Raven king. Its weird, but bear with me. So jungle girl and ronda venture out into the woods to find the road to the Raven king or whatever. Then they meet Mya, crazy cat bitch, I love her character a lot. She's a clown, hates the jungle girl who always spoils her fun. The two fight then mya tricks the jungle girl into showing her butt hole and rhino man rips her ass up. It is then that her mask comes off and it is revealed that the jungle girl is actually Verona, Ronda's old nemesis. Mya tells ronda not to worry about her and then the two go into the quest to find the king.

Raven king is the father of Mya, who has been banished from the kingdom. Mya offers him ronda in hopes of being returned to former good standing. He accepts ronda as a sex slave and tells his daughter to stay out of trouble. Mya's mother is a bunny girl, the queen. She hates ronda but accepts that her husband is in charge and has many concubines.

as you can see the whole lost world chapter is about animals of various kinds. So ronda learns that there are mystical artifacts called the golden nipples and that only a certain girl can access the doorway to them. They think ronda is the key. Using complicated method they get to the golden nipples. Ronda fights the bunny bitch over them. Mya kicks her mother's ass at the last minute and tells ronda to put on the golden nipples. Ronda gets the nipples and they give her great milk squirting ability which she uses to re-energize herself and she saves the day. With her new powers she becomes more in tune with her cowlike origin and without using any saiyan powers beats the raven, and she returns home with greater sense of what she can do with her much plumper tits. From this point forward she always has bigger boobs which signifies she's achieved greater power levels.

While all that shit's going on, Eve is having a hell of a time at a gladiator tournament she's been forced into. She also meets verona in disguise. A running theme. Ronda in one place yet meets verona, and eve in another and meets verona too. Verona meanwhile is getting fucked up as well. She's gets wizard blasted into a magical realm where she fights different versions of herself, ss1, ss2, ss3, jade princess (her original name), then she finds the Sword of athena, sword that can cut through anything. And from then on she defeats a dragon with it, and dissapears...

Just typing about it makes me want to do it again. This time better. But it hurts knowing that I threw a lot of really good drawings in the trash. It's like that time when I spent hours doing an animation of ronda vs verona in that gif animator program, then the computer froze. It's from terrible experience that I learned to ALWAYS save a project. I then redid the animation, and to my surprise it came out better than the original, but it sucks ass that the original is gone forever. Same shit, different year.

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